A Gentle, Melting Giant
The sweet snow creature
Lies dying in the mountains.
His name is Winter.
Though he tries to be gentle,
His frosty breath
Chills the bones of thin old men,
And pierces the soft, lumpy hearts
Of infants.
He watches elementary kids
Sledding down hills of melting slush,
But when he tries to help
And leads in one of his
Pet strom clouds,
The winds are too strong,
The snowflakes too sharp
(Like brittle throwing stars),
And he only manages
To chase them away.
So he follows them home,
Melancholy,
And stares with frozen, blue tears in his eyes
Into their windows.
They don't want to play?
No.
They have golden strings of lights,
And a crackling hearth,
And mugs brimmming with hot chocolate,
And soft sweaters,
And old music.
They have no need for him.
When he cries, and rubs at his
Weeping eyes,
It rains cold and hard,
And the highways freeze over.
People swear at him, and curse him.
So he withdraws, sometimes lingering,
Hoping,
But they swear all the more.
Now he lies here
Amongst the bitter, lonely peaks.
His heart is slush, and is it leaks
It mingles with his tears.
A mama bear and her cubs
Waddle by,
And he lifts his trembling head.
Company?
No.
The bears only sneeze and waddle away.
He begins to melt in earnest.
His icy arms fade.
The strength of December
Drains from his crystal bones.
Rivulets of crisp, biting water
Join together
And drip off the mountainside.
Streams and creeks become swollen
With the lifeblood of Winter.
The streams feed more streams,
Refreshing secret pine groves,
Cooling the throats
Of young bucks,
And giving a home to slippery,
Silver minnows.
The streams grow into rivers.
Great, rushing, bulging rivers
That gush with Winter's blood.
Lush green meadows
And towering aspens and cottonwoods
Thrive.
Spring gasps to life,
Her eyes fluttering.
She laughs and soars
On an apple blossom breeze,
But she tires quickly,
And bold Summer takes her place.
Winter watches from his rivers,
And wallows in his shallow pools.
The sun hurts his watery eyes.
Does no one love him?
Can he bring joy
Only in death?
He sobs alone, in some sunny
Forest creek.
But, then,
A little girl comes wandering down,
And sits with her legs in his water.
She plays for awhile and then says,
"Daddy says this creek is just
Last year's melted snow."
She scoops up the water
In her two hands,
And leans down to whisper,
"Don't tell my mama this,
'Cause she hates the cold,
But
I think I like Winter best."
Next Christmas,
The girl gets more snow in her town
Than she's ever remembered having.
Her mother shivers, but smiles
To see her daughter giggling
With her cheeks glowing pink.
Winter smiles, too.
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