Give Up?
when is it approprate
to give up and give in
when can the breathing stop
and the struggles cease to be
must this tradegy continue
must there be a crash and burn
cannot this end here and now
with a whisper in the wind
not necissary
and certainly not missed
when is it right
to give up
because this needs to stop
this heartache and headache
this car crash in slow motion
everything just needs to...
STOP
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