Give me

Fri, 08/10/2012 - 04:18 -- cbell93

Location

29445
United States
33° 0' 9.4068" N, 79° 59' 51.3312" W

Give me a second,
I’ll give you the world.
Give me a breath,
I’ll take yours.
Give me the time,
I’ll make it stop.
Give me your hand,
I’ll never let go.
Give me a smile,
I’ll never take it away.
Give me your heart,
I’ll cherish it.
Give me you,
And I’ll make you mine.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

like the concept
very practical , but meaningful

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