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Glazed


All they do is strut around Wearing stuff that shows as much skin as possible Short skirts, crop tops They're so glazed Smile that perfect smile Through the pounds of makeup Then turn and quickly glare Turn and keep beaming They're crazy glazed The perfect girls The cool girls The ones that they all wanna be Glazed They're female dogs Who said that? Not me, I don't want them to hear that I'll fly away Fast as I can I am not them I will never be I am myself Rather than glazed
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rose345

I am a student in a rural Midwest town. I hope someday to be a lawyer or a psychologist. Remember to always live life to the fullest because you never know where life will take you. Be the light! Leave a comment if my poem meant something to you☀

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal rejection of peer conformity, grounded in autobiographical observation

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple distinct ideas: appearance critique, social hierarchy, self-identity assertion

DarkSentimentBright

Negative toward peers, defensive uncertainty, some self-affirmation at end

StillEnergyExplosive

Moderate intensity; sharp observations, anxious tone, flight imagery creates movement

MicroLengthEpic

24 lines; falls in 16-30 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Glazed metaphor repeated; simile implied (fly away); mostly plain declarative statements

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; confessional, introspective, no narrative or dramatic shift

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