ghost

i wanted you to feel

how i felt

when i truly saw you

about yourself

a little less blue

so i gave you my words

hoping to help you find your own

and you turned

did you ever see me

or will i remain a ghost 

forgotten in your memories

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed please write more. 

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