The Golden Stage
I leap onto a golden stage
Swimming in the light
Figures in the distance
Couldn't dim down my might
A girl is there beside me
With a frog in her throat
She smiles so feverishly
Trying to stay afloat
I take a step towards her
Prompt her for her line
She stands up brave and tall
Like a star ready to shine
Together our voices soar
As they spiral up
Others join behind us
We bow in the lineup.
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Willow Poetry
Hello! I'm Willow Poetry. I write poetry as an outlet, to express my emotions, and for fun! I hope you enjoy my poetry, and feel free to write a comment.
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Personal theatrical experience with some universal performance elements
Multiple ideas: stage presence, collaboration, confidence, triumph across lines
Strongly positive; triumph, joy, empowerment, successful collaboration
Active verbs: leap, swimming, soar, spiral; kinetic and dynamic voice
16 lines; falls in 16-30 range
Similes, personification, metaphor; moderately ornamented language
Primarily lyric internal voice; minimal dramatic persona elements
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