Golden - A Story of Rapunzel
There once was a tale,
A tale different than what you’ve ever heard
About a maiden fair, stuck in a tower
With hair of gold, a lovely voice, a mirror
The tower can be reached by a dark, thorned forest trail
Mother Gothel didn’t steal her in the dead of night
Nor did she acquire her through bribery
Gothel adopted the girl out of the kindness of her heart
Rapunzel chose to lock herself away in her tower
Her fatal flaw not her her hair of gold, but her voice so bright
A Prince of the land heard about the girl with the golden hair
Locked in a tower, whose voice could beguile,
In the forest, her voice - such a pure voice - could be heard for many a mile
He headed into the forest, by order of his father, King Stephen the Bold,
Questing after the maiden fair
He arrived at the tower, spying through the trees her hair of gold
It was true!
Her voice was like honey in his ears, stirring his heart
That was only the beginning of the end, the closing part,
For the son of the King of the Bold
He called for Rapunzel to let down her fair, long hair,
And as she sang, she brought him up to her, in her tower
When his feet touched the floor, her voice turned sour
In his ears, discord, full of sharp, bitter words, of men’s stories she told
And it dawned-that to rescue her, as his father had said, she had nary a care
Rapunzel was a siren, this much has been omitted
From the books of tales across all nations
In her looking glass, Rapunzel had trapped men of all stations
Who had come to hear her voice
And whose souls ended up in her mirror of gold, the metal daintily twisted
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