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Gone


God looked down and saw a broken soul crying, he said child whats wrong with you and no lying. the child told him that his heart was shattered there was nothing anyone could do to stop the emotional bleed out, this one time he had faith god wasen't there and let him down. life in shambles he picks up a pistol and puts it and closes the barrel between his lips, he pulls the trigger and feels the bullet tip. for that split he felt pain but afterwards he felt relief, he'd gone and his suffering was over his last thought was I'll be in heaven with you soon my sweet.
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18 year old living in Martinsburg, West Virginia. loves to write poetry, I'm not looking for fame but I want to be noticed for my talents, it takes time and hard work in correct balance. on my journey I'll suffer many fails and successes, be prepared to experience a gift these poems come from my dark recesses.

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