Goodby Daddy

Daddy what's wrong?

Why aren't you strong?

What's going on?

 

Daddy I'm crying.

Please don't be dying.

Just keep on trying

 

Daddy don't be afraid 

We'll all come and stay,

and take away your pain

 

Daddy I love you, 

Goodby

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My family
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