Goodbye

Thu, 01/31/2013 - 20:34 -- cmh1993

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38° 41' 38.4036" N, 121° 18' 9.6768" W

Every single time i look up at the sky,
I see the stars and it makes me cry.
Because I know that you're up there and I'm down here
And I only wish I could hear
Your voice say you love me for sure
All I need is just once more
To feel your hand or see your face
Now all that's left is a small trace
Of you and your memory
All I want is just to see
That smile and those eyes
And all this time it was just a disguise
You couldn't even show me
What I really needed to see,
That you needed me more than ever
And now I cant except the fact you're gone forever
But in my heart you shall lie
And once again shall I cry
For all those times that we shared
And all those times you said you cared
I never really did believe you
But now I know its true
We loved each other always and forever
And you said you would never leave me...ever
But now that you're gone
I have to move on
Be strong and believe
That you're always going to be here with me.

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savigirl14

that is a beautiful poem. it has so many breathtaking details. keep writing and please read my poems and tell me what you think

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