Grandma's Ashtray
The intricate ashtray plunged
into the clear, cool, water.
Dark thumbs rubbed at the gritty metal,
removing the ash and revealing
the gold flecks underneath.
It was made of metal,
intricately shaped into a bowl with legs
and a barred top.
Turning green with oxidation,
it stored coins now.
It had been a long time since it stored ash.
It was an old tray, left to him
by his grandmother, a habitual smoker
who had died a few years beforehand.
The boy dunking it in the water didn’t know
whether this was the way to clean it,
but he continued to dunk the tray.
He hadn’t even known there was any gold in it before,
so he assumed he was on the right track.
He held the clean tray into the light
where he could see it more clearly.
He could now hold it
without dirtying his hands.
He put it back in his room
and dropped shiny metal
coins into it.
He replaced the barred lid
leaving the coins where ash once sat.
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