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Greater Love


You were the star football player

You told me you weren’t like the others

Who was I to say "No" to the star?

I was young, naive and that was to your advantage

I thought everything you did was the norm in a relationship

Didn't like my friend? Gone.

Didn't approve of texting him/her? Erased.

Didn't like what my parents said? Disobeyed.

But because I heard the words I love you, it made everything okay

You loved the "Me" that you created in me

I am a murderer though.  I killed that "Me"

I have overcome what was made to destroy me

And now

I am in love with the person who stares back at me in the mirror

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JacklynAmundsen
<p>There was a time in my life where I thought being obedient in a relationship was the way it should be. &nbsp;I was young and didn&#39;t know better. &nbsp;With a little help from my friends and a supportive family, I know better now. &nbsp;This peom is a story about me.</p><p>&nbsp;</p>

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