Gretel with a Twist
Mother, I am bare in a fog-ridden forest.
Only the moon shows tenderness.
Winter will crumple me: weary arms, soiled feet,
tongue of rust. I have a thousand visions:
you ironing a dress; eating
chocolate and honey; the sun drunk
and easy; spring blowing against a raw sky
and storms screaming; someone running as if their
life depended on it.
I hear you cry, Go, go. Take them, will you?
He does, along the sea road with its
stopped ship fast asleep. In this place
of elaborate beauty, it is mostly quiet, except when
the heaven-born wind wags and flaps
the branch he left tied
to a sere white ash. Silence itself is strategy,
a signed language,
gorgeous, fluid in the hands
of those who learned it in childhood.
You know we were never meant
to live here, only to learn relinquished,
forsworn, to grasp with wet hands the cold
metal of life, then find a way to let go.
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