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"Growing Up

by savigirl14

The sunlight rises in the early morning A young girl comes out to play Her heart is joyful and eternally soaring Nothing could ruin this day A ten year old sitting in a desk Waiting for the bell to ring She tries to sit still, she tries her best Waiting for the moment that she can sing A teen dreading the morning bell She suffers from a broken heart She awaits the day of living hell Nervous fo rthe school day to start It's off to collge for this beautiful girl Sadness comes with her goodbyes She watches her life ahead unfurl This is how we see her in our eyes
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savigirl14

I am a very creative person. I love to read, write, sing, dance and act. Poetry to me is a way of self expression that lightens someone's heart. I love white chocolate and my favorite book is Anne of Green Gables

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Comments (3)

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda
<p><span style="color: rgb(37, 37, 37); font-family: ITCFranklinGothicStd-Book, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">Powerfully expressed! Truly powerful! Keep sharing keep sharing! The world needs your expression! Keep sharing your life your mind your heart!&nbsp;</span></p>
macebell42
<P>This is amazing! You are such a great writer! Keeping doing what you do!</P> <P style="TEXT-ALIGN: center">M xx</P>
Mafi Grey
<p>Well this one is good. You had the "r" in for spaced over to far. I understand the concept of this as well. Good job, keep challeging yourself to do different topics and read others work if you look to become better and grow in knowledge as well. Check out some of the famous poems, quotes, writing styles, and formats as well. Don't be afraid to change and also you can write it however you desire it to be, but make sure your true through in out as you grow.</p>

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