Guilty for youre hate

December 22, 2020

while you told me your problems,

i patiently waited,

but behind closed doors,

you only hated,

but you always playd the victim,

and made me play the guilty,

and i knew in your eyes,

guilty, forever i will be.

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Paul TDec 23, 2020

<p>I like the brevity of the poem, but you need to space your lines (or at least space your commas).</p>