Haiku

by Uol

April 20, 2020

Someone suffering Alone vehement efforts Menacing end

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Annette M VelasquezApr 20, 2020

Intense, emotional and impactful... You've adhered to the syllable count of a haiku- perfectly. Most, if not all haiku deal with an element of nature- the seasons etc. If a poem is written in the same form, but about something other than nature, it is a senyru. Still, this is a remarkable senyru.