'Hallelujah In The Wind'
The edge of eternity
often obscured
lost in plain sight
just beyond
Until cutting through
a moments grief
immortalized
in song
Leonard Cohen and
Bob Dylan as one
freeing new spaces
inside
Where lost in
the maelstrom
alone disavowed
— the best of ourselves tries to hide
(The New Room: January, 2026)
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Philosophical exploration of eternity and mortality through abstract spiritual concepts
Dense layering of existential ideas compressed into fragmented, idea-rich lines
Melancholic tone with spiritual yearning; grief present but redemptive undertones
Restless fragmentation and enjambment create kinetic tension; contemplative but urgent
Micro poem; approximately 6 lines when formatted, below 7-line threshold
Rich metaphor (edge of eternity), personification (best of ourselves), allusion to Cohen/Dylan
Pure lyric internal voice; first-person consciousness examining personal spiritual struggle
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