Hanging In There
Hanging in There
When the world's too much to bare
And I'm on the brink
About to fall over the edge
Hanging in There
When I don't have a care
And I'm starting to sink
But I must make my pledge
"I'll be okay,
There's always another day."
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Willow Poetry
Hello! I'm Willow Poetry. I write poetry as an outlet, to express my emotions, and for fun! I hope you enjoy my poetry, and feel free to write a comment.
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal struggle with abstract resilience message woven throughout.
SparseMeasureDense
Two main ideas (struggle, perseverance) developed across ten lines steadily.
DarkSentimentBright
Begins dark but resolves toward hope and affirmation by end.
StillEnergyExplosive
Moderate intensity with metaphors of falling/sinking, tempered by calm resolution.
MicroLengthEpic
Ten lines total, falls in 7-15 line range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Uses metaphor (brink, edge, sink) with some ornamentation but mostly direct.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric voice expressing internal emotional state throughout.
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