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He Fuckin Hit Me !


i don't know why that stupid fool hit me ; everything was good until the fool thought he owned me . i was talking on the phone , talking to my friend who had just gotten home from school , & that's when that fool just lost his fuckin cool . started talkin shit , talkin bout who the fuck you talking to ?! betta getcho ass off the phone , tryna play me like i'm some fool ?! i'm not the type to take shit like that so i fired right back . got up in his face & said i don't need your ass ! he cocked back his hand and struck me in the face . i didn't have time 2 think , all those years were just a waste . the love of my life just hit me like some ho , that was the end of where our love started to grow . i hit his ass back and his cheek started to bleed . then we started crushing each other like feet on leaves . i blacked out after that , i don't remember shit until he up & left my house , but i remember feeling the hits .
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