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The Healers Among Us

October 23, 2019

It's MARVELOUS to see the harmony of those walking in Love, working together to care for Our SUFFERING. The connection of those HEARTS create HOPE. These are Our Healers. They flawlessly flow through the DARKNESS that surrounds Us, the DARKNESS that BLINDS & NUMBS Us from the PAIN of LOSING Ourselves, Our Loved Ones; For, We were... "Lost In..." In that GLOOM, Our Ancestors ALLEVIATE Us from beyond, touching Us through Our TWILIGHT TWATI WARRIORS!!!! They walk TALL into the OBSCURITY, firmly grabbing hands, one by one, GUIDING Our Spirits back to the LIGHT. They are Our People Preservationists, curing Us with their LOVE, empowering Us from the Spirits above.

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Blends personal/collective trauma with abstract spiritual philosophy and ancestral guidance.

Dense layering of interconnected ideas: love, suffering, darkness, healing, ancestors, spiritual redemption.

Predominantly hopeful and affirming despite dark imagery; emphasizes healing, love, light, empowerment.

Explosive capitals, exclamation marks, urgent imperative tone, kinetic verb choices (flow, grabbing, guiding).

Six lines; falls within 7-15 range boundary, approaching mid-length.

Extensive metaphor (darkness/light, healers/warriors), personification (ancestors touch/alleviate), symbolic language throughout.

Primarily lyric/collective voice with embedded dramatic elements; shifts between personal and communal 'Us/Our'.

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