Healthy relationship

Sat, 10/28/2017 - 17:01 -- dorcas

A healthy relationship is a love that consumes us,

It deepens and grows every day,

It is loving a person as we have wished to be loved.

“Because I love you” should be:

Enough to separate the ocean in halves.

Enough to make all echo cry for mercy

Enough to make the walls of Jericho tremble.

Enough to make Hells blaze in our eyes

Enough to make all of the thunder of the gods cuss

Enough to change the weather

Enough to beseech the clouds to pour out rain when standing in the dessert.

Enough for the night to grow old and whiten

Enough to make light burn till daylight

Enough to make our eyes be circled and closed

Enough to make our bodies suffer and die

Enough to make our souls fly to the seventh heaven

Enough to make hope our anthem  

Enough to remove all insecurities.  

Enough to make us mad, to make us laugh and to make us cry.

Enough to revive us from darkness

Enough to change the scenery round us.

“Because I love you” should be enough to fix the puzzle inside of us.

           

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Me
My family
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