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Hear Their Voices


Can you hear them –

those who have gone before us

speak to us

 and watch over us?

We are surrounded by our loved ones,

present both physically and spiritually.

It is a miracle when their voices

bring the words of the Holy Spirit

the times we lack the words.

 

I recently had a near death experience;

I was standing in God’s doorway

ready to step into the eternal beauty

of His kingdom.

But I was pulled back and awoke

in a hospital bed surrounded

by three images that I call angels.

They were a great comfort to me,

bringing the living water of Christ to heal me.

 

In a recent period of meditation,

I was brought back to that moment

and the angels revealed themselves

as the spirits

of my father, mother, and sister.

My comfort and spiritual being

are lifted by the voices of the loved ones

no longer with me.

Can you hear yours?

Those spirits who guide you through life?

 Listen!

We are in the Spirit of God’s presence forever.

 

Russell Kendall Carter, BA. MAT. Dlitt.

 

 

 

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rkcdlitt

I am a retired high school and college professor. The last 10 years of my teaching was as a college professor of literature and writing. I have self-published one book of prayers and meditations and am preparing another book of poetic odes to faith and love. I am truly honored to be welcomed into this group.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal near-death experience mixed with universal spiritual philosophy.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple spiritual ideas presented: afterlife, divine presence, healing, meditation.

DarkSentimentBright

Overwhelmingly positive: comfort, healing, spiritual presence, divine love.

StillEnergyExplosive

Meditative tone with urgent rhetorical questions; moderate intensity throughout.

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Approximately 40 lines; falls in 31-60 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Some metaphors (doorway, living water) but mostly declarative spiritual testimony.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric introspection; intimate first-person reflection on personal vision.

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