Heartbeat

by Poetryislife10

November 4, 2019

Every time I see you my heartbeat doubles.

I want to lose myself inside of you.

Your red hair is like a rose without thorns.

Your body makes the Gods blush.

Your personality turns down the sun on it's brightest days.

Your kind heart attracts people.

Your amazing sense of humor has me rolling on the floor.

You are the most amazing girl I have ever met.

I love you. I just don't know how to tell you that.

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Poetryislife10Nov 5, 2019

Thank you so much! Do you think you have any advice on how to better write?

Snow in AutumnNov 5, 2019

This is such a short and sweet love poem. It made me feel the longing and emotion you were trying to convey :) It reminds me of my poems "Time Doesn't Exist Near Black Holes" and "The Abstract Thought of Breathing" if you ever want to check them out! I think you'd really enjoy them!

Poetryislife10Nov 4, 2019

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