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Heartbreak Struggle


You keep putting me down Thinking that I'll come around This bitterness you've spread to me Keeps dragging me to misery It's hard for me to look at you And know this is what we come to Two hearts torn apart After we have fallen so hard The pieces have become so jagged Broken glass, snagged and acrid The beats start to thud louder Slower harder and with power My voice begins to yell Responding to your eerie voice from hell I've lost the fight and the battle But not the war nor the challenge
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Independencepioneer
<p>Dearest, I understand your poem so well, it kinda scares me... I just went through that about a week and 3 days ago... :( I hope all ends well! Remember: What doesn't kill you makes you stronger (except cowgirls; cowgirls will kill you) Have a great day, child. Oh, and I saw that you live (or randomly chose to label your poem) in Kernersville. I used to live there, about four years ago. I am, as of today, 13 years, 51 weeks, 8 hours, and 10 minutes old, so... ! Have a good day, sweetie!</p>

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