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Heaven on Earth


Everything is awesome when you are a Christian!  

Attacks on your mind, body and soul

Defeated by promises of peace, tranquility and happiness

Dog eat dog world, step on anyone to rise to the top

Yet triumph lies with the one that promises the lion will lie down with the lamb

A monkey on your back saying take your own life because you're just a waste

is beaten by the one who loves you just the way you are

You'll never be good enough

Trampled by the one who says I made you and I love you.  You are mine!

Work, work, work more money means more happiness

Reversed by the One who knows material things will never make you happy

You deserve stuff!

Replaced by good deeds which help yourself and others and bring true happiness

Chaos, anger and fighting

Exterminated by peace, love and hope

Everything IS awesome, when you are a Christian!

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