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hello

by csstyson

hello has a long way to go with a short time to time to get to there  . because a simple hello on a rainy day when im feeling down puts me exactly where i need to be . or when im lost and i dont no where to go a simple hello from way over yonder becomes my only hope . when hello is followed by how are you and how is your day ... hello kinda reminds me that im still a human being hello  to project how one really may feel and yes i know your hello probably disrupted your day but im glad you took time out of your day to acknowledge me ...Hello

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<p>Are you trying to channel the spirit of E. E. Cummings with the spelling and grammatical errors?<br /><br />I&#39;m going to give you benefit of the doubt and assume that you are taking some artistic liberty here, and you are breaking the conventions of spelling and grammar as a part of the poem, which, if that&#39;s what you&#39;re doing, then I think you have an ingenius piece here. &nbsp;I love rebellion against standards and conventions. &nbsp;<br /><br />Let&#39;s also assume your errors were not purposeful, then we need to adress that your poem is doing something really awesome here. &nbsp;You&#39;re telling a short story in your poem about the narrator&#39;s longing to be acknowledged by a simple &quot;hello.&quot; &nbsp;Wow! &nbsp;That&#39;s a powerful thought, because all too often people are neglected and stratified for whatever reason. &nbsp;I like this piece for its simplicity. &nbsp;</p>

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