hello

the air seemed dark and misty but the fog has cleared to revele the sun that burns
my skin.what seemed like forever is now only minets in a day.
wishing time could stand still. though, now it won't so sad that it's so.

Hello new air. Hello new dawn. please stay and make me new like you have
done this blest morning

it's new and strong. I'm scared to dive into you and see what adventure you have
awaiting me. Make me sore like the birds. my chains are off and I now can sore higher
than ever thought to be possible. Hello new biggening that I have yet to learn. What is 
this? I have never been more pleased in the air that's around.
what is this?! it makes me joyed....hello sun. I'm back

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