Her. (Part two)
She looks so beautiful..
She wears her lovely white dress today
Her ginger hair long down her back
The music plays
Many people are here with us, dancing
A lovely smell wafts through the air..
I dance with her
She twirls once, and I dip her in my arms
She looks so beautiful..
She wears her lovely white dress today, covered in rust-colored stains
Her ginger hair tangled and matted
The record player screeches
Many people are here with us, lying motionless on the ground
A putrid smell is in the air, tainting all who come
I dance with her
She sways once, and I carry her lifeless body in my arms
My love..
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