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The Hermit's Request


in a far off place gone from all known accepted civilization lived a man caught in his own world had a hut with green moss In the evening he prepared a table with a goose & port was a hunter and gatherer to the outdoors captured his imaginative thoughts on a scroll day and night he would often pray to God alone in his silence he had a quaint encounter with a visitation an angel appeared at the edge of his bed thoughts were swirling inside his head the angel said, "God has heard your prayers". one word from his lips and his world turned around left to his own devises he would fail yet with the help of God he would set sail the hermit decided to go into town to see if there were others like him around there is a barren hill lived a nice lady named lily she was nice but awfully silly fir it was there he had made his match was yhis to much to ask the pair fell deeply in love together the hermits' request was answered They lived happily ever after
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Mario Vitale has written well over 1,000 poems toward his platform in creative writing. His main ambition is to receive a poetry contract. He looks up to present poets John Ashbery & Major Jackson for their contribution to the arts. Vitale studied theatre at Central Connecticut State university in New Britain, Ct. Presently you will see Vitale's poems on the world wide web such sites as Wrterscafe, Neopoet, Starlitecafe, Poetrysoup & Allpoetry.com He appears in anthology's, magazine articles and editor choice award for poetry. Facebook has been an outlet for Mario Vitale in connecting to family & friends.

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