The hidden message

August 19, 2013

Close your eyes and what do you see, it could be be all of the things that you are destined to be, but stop, were trapped in this closed world, trying to look but were stuck on the past curl, when everything is shunned down and looked upon, then they looking at you with all of that pity huh.

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King DariusAug 19, 2013

<p>It's one thing to be in the struggle, then you mess up like stepping in the puddle, so you rebuttal, going harder then the treble, finding yourself trapped in the sin world just like the devil.</p>