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his love

by kika457

I can't help but crave, and want so deeply His touch, full of everlasting warmth His arms around me, so soft and sweety This boy who leaves me so torn Idk were to go with this poem, if someone could give me some suggestions, that would be greatly appresiated
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Dinosaur98
I can't help but crave, and desire so deeply His touch, full of everlasting warmth His arms around me, so soft; the tension between us is so slim This boy who leaves me so torn is the one i yearn for No, don't go the mood is just right, the chemistry is there, don't you feel it? I surely do, but it takes two to tango, and I'm the lead, but i can't lead myself So please come hither and hold me again I lust for your love "his love" (: i don't know if that's the kind of poem you wanted but i wanted to help you out :)

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