His Words

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90008
United States
34° 0' 29.9628" N, 118° 20' 56.8212" W

His words flood my soul with emotions for the first time felt. Touches my pride and reaches for my heart, with intentions to grab it and pull it close to his. the hushed toned melody sang from his eyes have the ability to seek passion, to see inspiration and to look for dedication in a dark hole with light hidden. with light forgetten. because no one's ever thought of turning it on.  ooo and he drains fear from my mind.  he closes my eyes and opens my imagination.  every breath that he makes  is every breath that he takes.                  away from me.                              his willpower lifts me off my feet above cloud 9. and for the first time, I'm not afraid to fall.but there's something I must admit after all. I'm impressed with not the way you dress, but the way you rhyme. i dont know, but something about it just blows my mind. and each time you pause at the end of a line, sensual chills flow up and down my spine. And I'm feeling the way you got everybody snappin I mean not only that, but you got souls collapsing. baby, your a bomb, sending out full force explosions. got things, moving in a way where they gotta explore new motions. Each person is arroused, and the women in here keep tugging on their blouse. the fellas are sweatin' drippin. and me? Well...I'm over here trippin. Trippin' as to why your holding my hand? And thanking me for letting you become my man.Listen, I think you're a bit confused. But...I'm in love with the poetry not the poet.

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