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How are we so obsessed with physical strength? all of us are so weak compared to the metaphysical bonds and forces aroun us? why dont we just submit? true strength is so strong and invisible and chemical.its not the visual or testable things we normally equate it with. shallpw and showy and weak*? true strength is uncontainable and uncontrollable. its so dangerous we havent even come to terms with it on our own level. weve created or own version of it as humans to feel like we have, or have earned some level of control. it is to keep our own doubt and fears and minds at rest and at bay before we learn how uncontrollable and on the brink of destruction everything is without the peace that omehow undeservingly surrounds us.
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