Hold on

by Moriahsolgan

February 23, 2014

And hold on

Hold on to your feelings

Crash and burn you emotionless child tell me your name

Fight the fear, spill your game

Youre lost. I can tell

I know where you are

But youre so gone

Its impossible to see where u began

Twist the knives in your back and bring them out

Use them against your will

Fight off the demons

In the end

Youre alone

You and all those knives

Its dark

This place youre at

And you wouldnt be there if you had just opened up

But u let people walk on u

And all you will ever be is a twisted story no one ever saw the beginning to and never felt the end

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Alexis98Jul 17, 2014

<p>This is strong and great poem. Your an amazing poet. I had anger problems when I was younger because I didn't open up to anyone,but then I found my angel and I've stopped getting into fights and life's been good so far. I'm 16 years old this is a good way to get people to talk.</p>