Homeric Simile
I look in the mirror and I see
Someone else looking back
A pure beauty
Her eyes are sparkling and wide as can be
So young and innocent
It’s hard to believe
Her hair is artistically curled and soft locks hang
With a dress so elegant
She’s claiming her fame
Her mind is picturing the lights
The music and the crowd
And everywhere she sees the people dancing around
Her dream fortunately comes true
For a sweet lady with a mother’s touch
Helps the young and innocent girl with her preparation
Such as when the grey-eyed goddess
Helped to make the loyal Penelope look flawless
Penelope was presenting herself to the rowdy suitors
The same men who sat all day
Waiting to pursue her
The girl’s mother is similar to the goddess tonight
Always aiding the girl throughout her life
As when Athena aided Odysseus on his journey home
Afraid he would never reach his beloved Ithaca
She gave him hope and made sure he was never truly alone
The girl’s mother did her hair and brushed on the soft glitter
Swiping the deep red on her lips
As such when the thousands went to Troy
All facing a bloody doom after landing their ships
The sweet lady embraced her daughter
And saw her off
In another time Penelope said goodbye to her only love
Saying sweet words to him
And praying for his safety to the heavens above
The mother was seeing no one else but her sweet girl
So young and innocent as she
Carrying the answer to her mother’s entire World
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