Hope you die first

Hope you die first that’s all I can think about.

Your love was like Poison that fell down on me like acid rain.

I felt the love but loved the pain.

Nothing hurts worst than love.

But love sometimes feels good.

 

Falling for you was like jumping off a cliff into dull poison needles.

Pointless. Pulseless.

 

Bullets flew about like ants running from the rain.

But I stood still with each shot I fell in love with the premise of pain.

You said it's fine you told me it's over.

 

But I knew your betrayal just begun your all the same.

Just a wireless hoer.

 

Tell me did it hurt to tell so many lies.

Or was it as effortless as it looked without a bat in your eye.

 

Tides changed but the pain stayed the same.

Just a soft swift bullet going through my brain like it was tissue wrapped in cellophane.

 

But hey with all this poison in our veins from the love we both made

 let's see who dies first.

 

But ill tell you this bitch I hope you die first.

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My community
Our world

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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