How Far Down?
How far down does my deepness go? Does it only extend to the end of my clothes? Is it the shoes that I wear? Or the car that I drive? Do I appreciate the gift of simply being alive? Do I take pleasure in others? Or is it all about me? Can I only relate to the things that I see? Can I contemplate? Speculate? Or barely scratch the surface? Is it really ‘all about the Benjamins’? Or do I live life with a purpose? Do I step over others on my way to the top? Am I heading down the wrong road And just refusing to stop? Is it about the job? The status? Or the trips that I take? Are my friendships superficial? Is my love for neighbor fake? Do I run off at the mouth, Carelessly saying just what I feel? Have I consideration for others? Is anything about me real? How far down does my deepness go? Through just the three top layers of my skin? Do I spend time with children or older ones, Or does my patience run too thin? Am I the life of the party when times are good? Or spending all my time on fun and games? Am I searching for the true God while he may yet be found? Can I be counted on when tribulation rains? How far down does my deepness go? Yeah, how far down? How far down? Do I dare to know?
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