how much he loved her

July 2, 2013

her screams turned to silence

as he pulled her hair back

and covered her mouth

she kept saying no

pleading him to stop

as he continued to tell her

how beautiful she was

and how much he loved her

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetAug 16, 2013

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