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gratefully appreciative humbly spectating my friends sery, tato, prisionera, and jorge (georgie) take initiative as they perform their poems on stage express their poems with no fear nor rage assert their passion with love, fire, and emotion more genuine than someone stealing a line from a page as i watch them perform, i became more intuitive of embracing poetry of all form to some viewers, it may be consider not the typical norm they were not afraid they perform not because of the paid it was for the moment it was that time to showcase their talent that was when it dawned on me to have that opportunity to let me be let all viewers one day see when my time comes to perform, my poems are so genuinely heartfelt that people won't flee i thank my fellow poets in embracing the art that's poetic my words of meaning will impact lives that's floetic never believe in wasting anyone's time i say what i mean, i mean what i say that is worth more than three nickels and a single dime it is even more empowering to see my boricua poets speak overrides societies perception of Spanish people being a sneak
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
<p>thanks for the support</p><p>join my group mvp-most valuable poets</p><p>promote your work</p>
Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda
<p>Powerful expression!&nbsp;</p>
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
thank you for reading my poem and showing love check out my other poems my brother i'm always writing
poeticmindset7
Simply inspiring . Thank you, for allowing me to understand as you do
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
im just getting started lol ty 4 your love and support check out my other poems
Eunoia
I like how you span of vocabulary, it's fun play on the tongue. I like it, keep it up!
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
marie-thank you for having my back-i'm humbly appreciative of it just want ot make it clear that i'm not discouraged in any way, if anything, i'm even inspire to be greater when you have those that try to bring me down everybody is entitle to one's opinion, but people must truly understand that there is no one style of poem marie-check out my other poems and tell me what you think and once again-thanks 4 having my back
marie
Hey Naijabyblood, constructive criticism is good, but PP is not the place to discourage other poets' writings. We support every poet, at every stage of expertise. Velezjrobert: your work and drive continue to inspire me. I'd love to see you submit a video poem--maybe of you performing a piece, or even just a voice over to camera shots.
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
this is a poem about fellow poets who inspired me to be great to never be afraid to express myself i thank them for that
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
1st off, poems come in many forms and styles my overuse of rhyme doesn't dilute the poem itself, it gives a powerful message to viewers perhaps , you should read it again, and make a better assessment poems is very universal, keep that in mind may not relate to you, relates to other poets
Naijabyblood
I give you credit for trying, but the overuse of rhyme diluted the poem and made the poem okay instead of outstanding. Keep going you have some things to work on.

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