Hundreds of Them Gone
They grow long,
coming out the same home
getting thick by each slice
rarely pulled by the core.
There are hundreds of them,
brushing against loose pants
pressed against leggings
getting pulled by denim.
There is neve a time,
to soak the skin in water
to soften the suface
before the fine blades cut the heads off.
Then the final moment comes,
when the feeling is heavy
when the pain drags on
when summer springs along.
That's when the white cream appears,
covering every inch of color
covering every strand
like a white cloud on the surface.
Thousands of them go down the drain,
swirling until unseen
allowing the brightness to come back
as a gentle warm breeze kisses the skin.
The best feeling comes at night,
right after the execution
when a silk blanket is laid on top
the comfort of knowing they're all gone.
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Concrete personal experience of body hair removal with minimal abstraction.
Multiple ideas layered: growth, preparation, removal, relief. Dense but meditative pacing.
Mixed; discomfort and pain offset by relief and comfort at resolution.
Moderate intensity. Visceral imagery and movement balanced by reflective moments.
Approximately 28 lines across stanzas. Falls within 16-30 range.
Similes and personification present but restrained. 'white cloud,' 'warm breeze kisses.'
Pure lyric internal voice describing personal bodily experience and sensation.
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