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Hunger In Your Eyes


I am afraid of the deer at night
hiding and leaping out in front of the car
I am happy when the sun appears
Only seeing deer in the distance then
I slightly miss when we only had four feet
Not four wheels
I remember going into the woods with you then
I took you to my favorite tree to climb
Only because
I saw hunger in your eyes 
An outdoor cat bored 
of the familiar spaces indoors
Yes, I loved you always.
We saw a deer 
that day in the woods
I smiled and ran to it
To minimize the distance
and I know you watched me do it
Your creature, I became named 
And I know you liked me that day
When I tried to make you full
The deer ran away
Despite my desire
Taking with it my hope 
To feel the fur on its back
I was never really able to escape the constant space, between the deer and me
Or fill your hunger consistently 
And I suppose I lost all hope 
chasing deer in the woods for you
Never quite close enough 
To touch 
Or satisfy 
Down a twisted dark road
So fast we go
As I sit afraid of the deer 
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