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Hurdle


 
Acting as stupid as a dull door nail
When you could be getting everything right/
Thinking you are so amazingly cool/
Refusing to even hold any pen/
Always very high and smoking a joint/
Does your dead and damaged brain even run?/
 
Like a scratched broken record do you run?/
Pants sagging and you are biting your nail,/
Feigning indifference to the burning joint/
That has caught on fire, yet you are right???/
In the dark, you prick yourself with a pin/
Yet during day, you are so freakin cool/
 
Giving me the shoulder that is so cool/
To the touch, go ahead and start to run/ 
Away from the problems, put down that pen/
That writes down your fears; cause then it’s death….nail/
And coffin. DON’T! I promise you, I’m right/
But please prove me wrong and throw out that joint./
 
All of your mistakes are due to that joint/
Staying on the outside, where it is so cool/
You still refuse to help yourself and write /
Down your problems, you think it’s best to run/
You are so slow, like extricating a nail/
You have been captured in this wretched pen./
 
For you’re and my sake, I have penned/
This poem; your unstable parents have joint/
Custody. You feel you’re being nailed/
To a cross, not with jesus; but in the ‘cool’/
Depths of hell, yet you still refuse to run/
Because you cannot d o anything right./
 
Please tell me I am finally right./
With that, I take my leave and lay this pen/
Down, it is time to quit this final run/
We are the same; we both hold this damned joint./
We do not have to try to be cool,/
In our hurting hearts is the rusty nail./
 
 
 
 
 
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