Hymn of heavenians

Location

bhanjanagar
lic colony state-odisha;dist.-ganjam
India

From decades of
Hypothecation
Knocking on behalf
No door still open

A land we woe
Said to be heaven
No gwon no crown
Out of throne

Trials after trials
We have to often
Bloods on palm
Offer to pin

Beg with bow
By the loan
Friends ,not we foe
Think our return .
@pravat

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