I Am a Deep Thinker
I am a deep thinker
Of the living
Of the dead
Of the happening
Of the unseen
Of the omnipresence
Of the reasons
Of beings that be, become, and then no longer
I ponder the things that I know and gather awareness of the things I ponder
I am constantly questioning the things that I know
Forever told that with age and experience I will understand
“My questions will be answered over time”
The griots prophesized this during my resurrection ceremony
These questions garb themselves in ordinary
Trust me they are not
There is nothing mundane about them
They expand and reach depths that have never been accessed by sublunary minds
My thoughts provide food for thought
To the highest, supreme part of that which exists
Which can be perceived
Which cannot be seen
Always there they stay
I need the answers
I need the answers
So that these thoughts can go away
One thinks
But doesn’t know
And I,
I strive to know
I am a deeper thinker
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Philosophical inquiry into existence, consciousness, metaphysics; personal only as vehicle.
Multiple dense ideas per section; existential, epistemological, spiritual layers compressed.
Restless questioning tinged with frustration; seeking answers suggests unease balanced by intellectual drive.
Urgent, insistent repetition and anaphora; intellectual fervor tempered by meditative pacing.
Approximately 28 lines; fits 16-30 range.
Personification (questions garb themselves), metaphor (food for thought), allusion (griots); ornate yet philosophical.
Pure lyric internal monologue; introspective 'I' voice throughout; no narrative or dramatic shift.
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