I am Flawless

by bluestar

January 14, 2015

Am I truly flawless, do i really belong

After seeing what people consider flawless

I really do question whether I am or not

Once the critisism starts it's hard to believe

Then being told, "It's what's inside that counts."

Pondering on that bit of advice I realize

I am flawless on the inside, and that is what counts.

I am an amazing person no matter what anyone says.

Now i can answer the question with confidence

And tell anyone who asks why

It would be simple, it is what's on the inside that counts

I am truly flawless

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bluestarJan 14, 2015

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