I Am Here........................................Hears You
Personally I believe when you lose comfort is when you learn what matters/when you realize the relationship was founded by lust, please be mentally robust, then maybe down the ladder, you'll find love, begin a new chapter/some of the most important conversations happen in silence, blinded, still see through the chatter/flip sides, sing but no jahiem (R&B singer) or can't rap, no chance being a rapper/I have a better chance seeing the rapture and the one after, laughter 🤣/biopsy can be the end, chemotherapy is not ur friend, if you consume nicotine, you've then defeated cancer/trust a primary care physician again, or a U.S.American president????.... chit, even A.I. (Allen Iverson) wouldn't question the answer/mind over matter, never become so thirsty that you drink from every cup, cuz it might be shit from your toilet/common sense is a blunt of dro that doesn't blow, depending who spark it/common sense is a flower that doesn't grow in everyone's garden/if you believe in Jesus would you feed a once temporary friend, who turned into your enemy when he turned you in, at Mickey D's if he was starving? Quiet alarming, when you told'em" kick rocks snitch, you a b!+$$/then say grace, asking for forgiveness? Jesus is not the One to be bargaining with, you're not the smartest/and some people are only meant to love from afar, but they're still in your heart, knowing your bro is LEOnardo DiCaprio departed. .... mic drop, Amen 🙏
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Mix of personal wisdom and abstract philosophy; grounded in lived experience.
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Rapid-fire ideas: relationships, trust, health, morality, spirituality compressed densely.
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