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I Am Rust


I was once the shiniest of all, I was like a tower - tall, My dreams were endless, Were endless like an infinite hall. The roar was deep, The daylight could not keep, The curtain descended down upon, The sides now saturated - into the building water shall seep. Slowly uncared for - I'm damaged, I decend into metals darkness, My fears have come to light, Sunlight had now shown upon my structure. The land and I now desiccate, The land not in upkeep, My life was in negligence, All seemed to be disremembered. The rays do their dance, I stand - still erect, Oxidization of my skin, O how it burns me so. Slowly I rot, Slowly I rust, Slowly I ruin, Slowly I conclude. I am rust...
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lizardoa21
<p>Really descriptive piece. the rhythm at first is kind of forced and choppy but what you ahve to say is beautiful. I recommend listening to music it helps a lot when writing poetry. By music i mean other poets. If you are interested I can give you some amazing names to listen to.</p>

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