I am... Scholarship Slam

by Jbizabeast19

November 3, 2015

I am from the (Safe Enviornment)

Clean, safe and tranquil

It (sounded)

I am from the (rose)

the (rose)

(sharp, attractive, )

I’m from the (survival) and (strong)

from (Paulette) and (Mark)

I’m from the (Ambitious)

and Brave

from (intelligent)

(strong)

I’m from (Christianity),

(believer of God for all my life)

I’m from (Chicago Il),

From the (Brave).

I am from (the Windy City and Awesome personality)

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Comments (1)

Jabarre BatesNov 3, 2015

<p>It was good but the parenthesis are taking away all the feelings in the poem. It's distracting the reader from actually feeling what you're trying to portray in the poem. </p>