I Do Notice

August 13, 2017

I do notice.

I know what you are going through

Because in you I see some of me.

It's as if He has had it get you too.

Except there is a problem.

I don't know how to help.

I just know that I want to grab my bow

And use the arrow to make myself yelp.

I see your pain.

But what can I do?

All I want to do is help.

I want to see you less blue.

I ask if you're alright.

It seems like the thing to be done.

What am I to say though?

When you tell me you cannot run?

If I can't figure myself out

How can I ever assist?

I really want to help you

But my mind seems to resist.

"I have issues." You let out

"I just can't find my way."

I don't know what to do.

How can I erase a bad day?

Please know that I do notice.

I really want to help you.

I just wish I knew how.

I pray for the day when I can know you're not blue.

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