I feel all dis power,&

I feel all dis power, 

But one touch an I'll fall down like a broken tower, 

At first I was closed up den I blossemed like a flower, 

Doin weekly prayers like I'm a pastor, 

Walkin thru everything, 

But now im locked in a room without any doors, 

A house without floors, 

A school without whores, 

Shoppin without the stores, 

A beach without the shores, 

I feel like I'm always missin sum, 

Like a gun without the bullets, 

Joe Dirt without the mullet, 

 

 

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

selenadporter25

I like your rhyme scheme 

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